Sunday, 28 April 2013

The Hole In The Road by Aidan and Brandon

              CHAPTER 1 THE TREASURE

  It was a sunny day, when i was walking down the steep,bumpy hill and then i saw a massive hole in the road.Then i took a look down it,it was as dark as the night sky i couldn't see a thing and then when i had a closer look i could see something shiny (which looked like treasure to me).I bent over and stumbled into the huge hole i could only just see the treasure at least it looked like it was, luckily enough it was treasure.This was my luckiest day of my in tire life,well that's what i thought. I could hear people talking in the distance,their voices were coming closer...


  How stupid was i,what was i thinking?Poeple coming closer!I turned 
around and to my surprise i saw a tribe of people.I screamed at the top of my voice.
"hello." said one of the voices,"what are you doing down here?"
"I.......I was ..just taking a look around."I stuttered.
Once the tribe turned around I grabbed the shining treasure and made my way to the top of the mysterious hole.I stumbled a few times,however I still made it to the top.

         CHAPTER 2 MY FOOTBALL

     Two years had passed since i found the treasure.I was playing with my football near the very same hole.

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