The Hole in the Road
Once there was an plane street just like evry other street.Untill a bilder came and made a tiny hole in the road wich cracked, parts came crumbling of.By the end of the week the tiny hole was as titanic as a car.so the boss of the town came and called a hole lot of bilders to come and fix the problem so they came.two days later a boy came, who was called Tommy, who was intresed and went past the safty fence and fell strait in to the hole...
He woke up on a horse and a cart heding to london,he was looking around to trie to guess were he was and what day it was so he asked the man driving. He said ''1989 wednesday and 3pm sir.''So they went riding agian tommy not nowing he was a million air and very famous becuase he was the best footballer and he was the ungest perfeshanal . He only just remerd only rich people had 12 hourses and a golden carige. He was now at his home eating lots of ribs when he achally woke up he relised he was driming and he was achally at home resting becuase a bilder saw him unconstush lieing in the hole so he got took home to wake up!
that was realy good Bita and Alec you should do some more
ReplyDelete8 out of 10 well done :)
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