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Friday, 19 April 2013
The Hole In The Road by Ben Chamberlain
Once on an ordinary day there was suddenly a hole in the road it wasn't there yesterday so I checked it out. As soon as I went down there it immediately shot down boulders so it shut me in. I found a flashlight on the floor next to a skeleton I immediately dropped the flash light however, it was only dead.
I picked up the flashlight and i saw a sign it said. Quest 1 Way Of Wisdom. I didn't know what to do but then I saw these presherpads on the floor I stepped on one nothing worked then I stepped on another and I was plummeted with an arrow.I didn't think at all and i sprinted through getting one or two arrows in me however, it was over.
Then another sign I thought seriously another quest. Quest 2 Leap To Victory. I was stunned however I done it. I didn't look down to my death. Amazed by my leap I was across.
It was so hard I was scared stiff but it was over.
then another quest I hate this cave GET ME OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Quest 3 Running Wild. Then RUMBLE RUMBLE! OH NO!!!!! A bolder crashing down like a rocket i was sprinting as fast as i could. Suddenly i lost my footing in a ditch i thought i was going to get flattened like a pancake. Good bye cruel world. As i was huddling in the ditch. It was over until I saw a mysterious figure. He saved my life well i assumed it was a boy.Until it was a girl i thought WOW!!! Then another Quest. Oh come on!!! Quest 4 Number jumble. Lets just get it over with. Oh yeah what is your name. Charlotte my names Charlotte. Oh ok then lets go then. Wait you need the correct code. Jest forget it. I know the code. Then why didn't you go then i heard you so I waited you realy take your time she commented on. Lets go then i impouted. She enterd the code and we were out. I was a bit loopy then Freedom Freedom!! that was in my mind forever.
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that is vere googd ben
ReplyDeleteabout 0 out of 10 not relly 9 out of 10 it was good
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