The Dragon woke up and let out a massive roar it was dinner time...Fiecely,the mighty Dragon blew
a gargantuan flame it made the hole village set on fire ,moreover all the petrifyed people ran
for their lives ,however the mighty Dragon was to fast!
Even all the over villages were fleeing,not even guns would hurt the dragon ,he just would not give up he was to hugry to give up.
millions of houses were destroyed,thousands of inasant people died. A hole village of people was not even enough for a dragon like this...
You've used some fantastic vocabulary in your story Aiden. I'd like to read part two some day!
ReplyDeleteMrs Smith
95 words counted,and I was going to say the exact same thing as Mrs Smith but she beat me to it
ReplyDeletethis is Haiden Norman by the way
Delete93 but fantastic vocab Aidan I LOVE it :)
ReplyDeleteCaitlyn
91. Capetil letter and comma's are my problem. Sorry.
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