Friday, 16 November 2012

100 Word Challenge 1 by Mrs Smith

Wow! Year 6 your stories are amazing! I couldn't resist having a go at this challenge myself as I love to write stories too.

The dragon woke up slowly and peered into the gloom. Listening deep into the deserted tunnels, he anxiously awaited the clanking echoes of armour, cold steel and naïve youth.
Extending his battle ravaged wings; he released a rumbling sigh that spoke of a life filled with anger and regret. He remembered the stories of his ancestors, legends of mighty dragons conquering evil along side proud, loyal knights.
But that’s all they were; stories of another time that could never be repeated.
Gathering himself to his full height, Mordagon, the last of his kind, prepared once again for the cruelty he must endure until his time ends.

6 comments:

  1. I love your sentence openers Mrs Smith! Well done.

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  2. this is liam from sunny side and i think you're story is great

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  3. wow Mrs Smith this is brilliant i really like it and love the description xx

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  4. It look good. 100. Opener are good

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  5. i like it mrs smith i would never be able to write like that

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  6. HOW DO U PUT CHALLANGES AND POEMS ON THIS MR BIDDLE

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