Thursday, 15 November 2012

100 Word Challenge 1 by Caylan

The dragon slowly woke up and he walked out side he whanted some one or somethink to eat . he  wanded around and had a look for somthink  but insted he found  a nother dragon he pushed him and then he pushed him back then it started to come out into  a  fight he got scached and evry one saw and was just staring at thenm but then he got anoyed with the people just staring at them so he got some one eat them.
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3 comments:

  1. Haiden Norman19 November 2012 at 22:51

    93 words counted, make sure it makes sence and at a little bit more description.

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  2. WEJS21 November 2012 at 13:46

    85 words but have mor description :)

    Caitlyn

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  3. Alex5 December 2012 at 13:48

    78. Way of the target. Not enough description. Capetil Letters. Sorry.

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