Thursday, 15 November 2012

100 Word Challenge 1 by Elvin

The dragon slowly woke up and went to eat some humans, he travelled far across the land hoping to find a human (eating pigs and cows on the way)untill he found a large kingom.

The dragon went to see if there was any one to eat, it was then when he saw the very fat king, he roared and ate him in 1 gulp.Then a small boy weilding a sword and shield charged at him, the dragon blew viciouse flames at him, but the boy wasnt scared, he jumped up on to his face and stabbed the sword straight through.The dragon was dead.

5 comments:

  1. I counted 106 words try not too use so many Elvin, by the way very good description

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  2. hi my name is kyle and im at sunnyside primy school and i hope ypu had fun wrighting all they words and i hope you got them all
    right

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  3. Hi my name is Zaen and I am from SunnySide Primary School and I thought your 100 story was amazing.

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  4. Hi my name is Dylan and I thought that description was great. By the way you missed the D in kindom

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  5. 100. Good luck as describesionis great. :)

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