Thursday, 15 November 2012

100 Word Challenge 1 by Ben H


The dragon slowly woke up and bellowed fire to set alight the local forest the village was petrifeid they were starving from the dragons mighty feats the bravest knight from the kingdom was injured from his prievous quest.

A boy from the village offerd to fight the beast he was taken to the kingdom the quest he had to complete was to free the curse betraying the kingdom the smoldering cave blasted his face with heat.

He had to rescue the golden chestplate he had has guantlets from before the dragon swiped at me I fell of the edge. I clung on to the chestplate,complete!

4 comments:

  1. arrr...great story so far mabey you can finish it later, by the way 105 words counted

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  2. 105 but quite good :)


    Caitlyn

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  3. Hi my name is Zaen and I am from Sunnyside Primary School and I really enjoyed reading your 100 challenge writing, it had good detail and it all made sense.

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