Thursday, 15 November 2012

100 Word Challenge 1 by Alec

The dragon slowly woke up and with his huge fat belly rumbling, went to town to eat some one big to fill him up after that he would go to a volcano to drink some lava and go back to his horrible green cave but today he was going to eat a hole kingdom when he got there, there was no one the so unforchanally he went back to his cave crim smelly to find out the hole massif kingdom was there in platinum shiny armour with razor sharp swords so the fight began sword men trying to stab the terrifying dark red sparkly shiny  dragon. 

3 comments:

  1. 105 words, good effort Alec but I wished you wouldn't of used loads of Adjecives at the end sentance

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  2. 100. The end of the sentices is amazing. You might win Alec.

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