Suddenly a terrifying bang echoed through the hallway... Petrified, I walked carefully out of my room, with my emergency frying pan at the ready. An eerie shadow trickled through the into the hall. It seemed to creep into my living room, almost as if it didn't want to be seen. WHACK! I swung wildly, and the shadow fell to the floor with a gargantuan thud.
Straight after, I switched the light on- only to reveal it was my Mum (who, for some reason, had my key). Eventually she came around, with my dog licking her face. As she was so dazed, she asked me what the frying pan was there for. I didn't really want to let on that it had been me who hit her, so I told her in a gentle, sweet way that I was cooking her a nightime fry up. I then explained to her that she must have fallen off the sofa. Did she believe me? I really don't know.
Straight after, I switched the light on- only to reveal it was my Mum (who, for some reason, had my key). Eventually she came around, with my dog licking her face. As she was so dazed, she asked me what the frying pan was there for. I didn't really want to let on that it had been me who hit her, so I told her in a gentle, sweet way that I was cooking her a nightime fry up. I then explained to her that she must have fallen off the sofa. Did she believe me? I really don't know.
Hi my name is Tylar and I come from sunnyside and your story has great wow words and is very creative It was amazing weldone.
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