Thursday, 15 November 2012

100 Word Challenge 1 by Maddie

The dragon woke up slowly and it apeered in a blow of frost and it looked huge  but when it walked a bit closer out of the frost  it was the tinyest dragon i ever saw it was so beutiful it was a lovely shade of chalky sky. It felt like i was going to get attaked but i edged forward a little bit and stroked it.It liked me it was like he was abanden by its mother I felt so sorry for it so I grabbed it and stuffed it in my duffle bag and ran off when I reached home It bit me .
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4 comments:

  1. WEJS19 November 2012 at 23:22

    I know why it bit you mabey cause you took it out of its resting place

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  2. Haiden Norman19 November 2012 at 23:24

    116 words counted, great vocabulary and puncuation WelDone

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  3. Alex4 December 2012 at 10:46

    100. Love the descibsion

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  4. alisha16 December 2012 at 12:03

    i like it maddie well done great words and vcop.

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