Thursday, 15 November 2012

100 Word Challenge 1 by Phoenix

The dragon slowly woke up after beging took down by armed people. They were drying to take him down but a group of planes fired gas boms at the meen dragon but he just wanted a freinds but the peopel did'ent no what he was saying.
The dragon was alone in a cage he dried berning the cage down but it was to strong the dragon was

5 comments:

  1. are u gonna finish it or is that it but good description, puncuation and WelDone :D

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  2. 67 words by the way

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  3. 61. You can finish it if you want.

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  4. i dident have timeto finish it sorry

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  5. The dragon slowly woke up after beging took down by armed people. They were drying to take him down but a group of planes fired gas boms at the meen dragon but he just wanted a freind but the peopel did'ent no what he was saying.
    The dragon was alone in a cage he tried berning the cage down but it was to strong the dragon was so upset that he fell a sleep.
    a youg boy came to the dragon and said dont wory ull get you out of this place. wen the dragon got out he flyed away.

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